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Group:		PAD

Representative:	Greg Webb

Other members:	John Chandler
		Marcus Petersson

Draft created:	27-28 Sep 1999, by Marcus Petersson

Finished:	not yet

The queue (top to bottom):

		Marcus
		Greg
		John

Seen by:	19th October, Greg Webb

Modifications:  Initial confirmation procedure added.
		Modified modification procedure (though it's not been entirely
		adhered to here as it's been agreed elsewhere, honest!)
		Minor style and grammar changes to tidy it up!
		Kommunity modified to Community, as with elsewhere.
		PAD organiser role created.
		Final, waffly paragraph added.

Seen by:        21st November, John Chandler

Modifications:	Minor corrections to typos.
		Slight modification to end of 2)
		Formalised the  tagging used by Greg on his turn
		Introduced concept of signed and anonymous Provisional tagging

Seen by:	25 Nov - 8 Dec, Marcus Petersson

Modifications:	Everything. :-)  To sum it up:
		Formalised structure (see description 1).
		New titles (see description 1).
		Introduced Step and Description titles.
		First use of subtitles.
		Actual changes of content:
		New sections Background and Brief slightly modified.
		Step 1, 2 and 4 modified from old text.
		Step 3 and Description 1-3 added, partly based upon old text.
		New tag system (see description 2).		
		More efficiant row usage (rows are now as long as possible upto
		max 80 characters). :-)

Seen by:	8 Dec - 11 Jan (oops...), Greg Webb

Modifications:	Little details and style cleanups all over the place!
		Tag system made marginally more coherent
		Hard linebreaks removed where possible to ease use on
                non-standard form factors. Most of this was done with my Palm
                III on the train!
                Legal bit added to try and cover us in case anything gets messy.
                Very sorry if this is getting too messy for people to read - I
                can follow it, but I can certainly see the sense in a dedicated
                PAD writer application...
                
Seen by:        22 Jan 2000, John Chandler

Modifications:  Minor reformatting, i.e. placing examples on new lines
                Minor addition to new Legal section
                Modifications and clarifications with certain tags.
                Added and formalised Cut and Moved tags (Marcus' initial suggestion)
                Added 'If the draft is wrong' 

Seen by:        4-13 Feb, 3-7 Mar, Marcus Petersson

Modifications:	Lots of tag removals. Lots of old text removals.

		In Step 1: Changed recommended group size.
		In Step 2: Slight change at the end. Some info moved to Desc 3.
		In Description 2: Modified almost all sections, mostly new examples.
		   Moved a section. Changed all example initials to XX, YY, ZZ.
		In Description 3: Minor modification. Moved two sentences.
		   New section: If the group is disbanded.

Seen by:        9 Mar - 19 Apr, Greg Webb

Modifications:	Some section aproovals
		Detail changes all over the place
		Introduced concept of disaprooval siqning.
		Comments all over the place. Sorry Marcus ;-)

Seen by:        19 Apr - 6 May, John Chandler

Modifications:  Removal and cleanup of tags
                Slight minor changes
		Formalised Greg's 'xYY' disagreement signing 

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